7 – 8 of the entries are posted within the time period assigned.
5 - 6 of the entries are posted within the time period assigned.
3 - 4 of the entries are posted within the time period assigned.
1 - 2of the entries are posted within the time period assigned.
None of the entries are posted within the time period assigned.
Completion
3/5
All entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner.
More than half of the entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner.
Some of the entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner.
Less than half of the entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner.
None of the entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner.
Explanation of Evidence
3/5
All of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place.
More than half of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place.
Some of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place.
Less than half of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place.
None of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place.
Authenticity of Evidence
3/5
All of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience.
More than half of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience.
Some of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience.
Less than half of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience.
None of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience.
Style, voice, creativity
3/5
All of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality.
More than half of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality.
Some of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality.
Less than half of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality.
None of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality.
TOTAL:
15/25
Summer Homework
Week #1:
In this week I saw a famous movie about the end of the world caused by an epidemic disease, this is one of my over-all favorite movies of all times, I have this movie, almost every time I am bored on my house and I remember about this movie I see it, in this case I saw it again, it’s called Resident Evil 3. This movie is about the end of the world, and the story of a project that The Umbrella Industry made and this project called ‘Project Alice’ got out of control, and the movie shows her adventures to her revenge, and how she can redeem The Umbrella’s Industries problem made, the end of the world. There has been three movies about resident evil, in this one she finds a group of survivors in trouble with some zombie birds, when she sees them she goes and help them, on the way Alice found a book on a gas station that said that the disease didn’t reach Alaska, so she propones the idea to the survivors to go to Alaska. When they are on their way to re-supply for the trip, they find trouble, The Umbrella Industry wants to get Alice back, so they send some mutant zombies to attack them, they survive the attack, and Alice saw a helicopter, she didn’t shoot it because she wanted it for the trip to Alaska. So they went to make a plan to steal the helicopter, they make it inside the fence of the helicopter, and everyone gets in, except Alice, she tells the survivors that she has to stay and figure out a way to solve this and make her revenge, after this, Alice goes down to the lab, and figures out that there’s a mutant there, and killed everyone on the lab, they fight, and finally Alice wins, but on the lab she sees millions of her clones, Umbrella Industries was trying to make a clone of her. But now, all of those clones, are on her side, and she tells the other people of the world that are hidden underground of Umbrella Industries to prepare. I like this movie and I will keep seeing it every time, but, maybe until the next one comes out.
Week #2:
Today I went to rent out movies with my sister, it is Sunday and we were bored so we went to get a movie, we wanted to have something funny so we saw the movie ‘She’s Out of My League’ the guy from the movies told us it was a funny one, so we checked it out. When we got home we made some popcorns and started seeing the movie, we loved the movie from beginning to end it was really funny. This movie is about a group of guys that work on the airport, and while they are working they see a ‘smoking hot’ girl, one of those guys is really humble, the other one is married, and the other one thinks all the girls desire him and that he is hot, so the guy that thinks he is hot tries to get the girl, but the girl didn’t pay attention to him, so the humble guy just helped the girl with her luggage, because the guy knew that the girl was really out of his league, so at the end this girl likes the humble guy, and many problems happen, the girl goes to lunch with the guys family, which is really strange by the way. But she doesn’t care she just cares about the guy, and the guy just keeps trying to be better for her, and tries to be someone that’s not him, and the girl want him, so that’s a problem. But at the end they solve all the problems and get together. This is a comedy and a love story at the same time, it’s really good.
Week #3:
On this week I went to the movies with my friends to see Prince of Persia. This is a really long movie, I did not like the movie, but it was entertaining in some parts. This movie is about conspiracy in the kingdom, the prince of Persia tries to find out what happened to his father, and the movie is about all the adventures he makes to find what happened. He is taken by a group of rebels, because the kingdom thought that he killed his father in this case the king. So everyone was looking for him, he found a girl on his way that at the end fell in love, but on the way the hated each other. Both of them make it out of the rebels, and many more problems that faced them, but they found their way to get out, and at the end he finds the truth, that his uncle was corrupt and killed the kind (his brother) but he found this out with the help of magic, with a knife that could go back in time.
Week #4:
On this week I went to the movies with my cousins and they went with their boyfriend and girlfriend, which was very awkward. But we had a good time, we saw toy story 3-D, it was really funny, even though it’s one of the most famous toddler movie. But we liked it; it didn’t have a lot of 3-D. This toy story was that Andy was going to college and he had to put the toys in a bag that went into the attic or to the garbage. So he got all his toys, except Woody to the attic bag, Andy decided to take Woody with him to college. So he got all his toys into a bag, but Andy went to talk to his sister and left the bag in the hall, so his mom got the bag and thought that the bag was garbage. So he took it to the garbage, Woody say that and went to rescue his friends, and told them that they were going to the attic not to the garbage, but they wouldn’t believe Woody. So they say a box that said “donations” and the toys decided to go there so that the kids in the daycare could play with them. So woody went into the box to stop them, and mom closed the car and Woody got trapped with his friends, when they got to the daycare they saw the entire place which was shown by the other toys in the daycare. Woody could get out of the daycare before the kids got in from recess. But when the kids came in and started playing with Woody’s friends, it was awful, they destroyed toys! When they wanted to get out of there, the other toys of the daycare were evil and did not let toys to get out of the daycare. So Woody went to another girl’s house for an accident, and the toys on the girl’s house told him that the daycare was evil. So Woody went back to the daycare and rescued his friends. So many events and problems happened but Woody and his friends got out. It was really funny and entertaining.
Week #5:
In this week I saw a classic, Mrs. Doubtfire. I found it in my dad’s old movies, he told me to see it, that it was really funny and that it was a classic. So I went and saw it. I liked a lot! It was about a father that did not have a job and was too disorganized, but he had a special and unique skill. He made voices, old woman voices, alien voices and etc. so with his brother that made costumes made him a costume of an old lady, and he made the voice of the new and invented ‘Mrs. Doubtfire’ his ex-wife was looking for a nanny and he/she was the perfect “lady” for the job. So mom gave him/her the job. He made this because he loved his children more than everything, and the divorce only let him see them one time a week, so that way he could see them every day. So he had to live to lives, Mrs. Doubtfire’s life, and the unemployed, divorced man who had to find a job. So he worked all day every day, he found a way and was Mrs. Doubtfire. He worked packing boxes for a TV company. At night when he was alone in the studio, he started dreaming that he was in the show and started making voices and the director of the show saw him and gave him an opportunity to be in the show. In the process of this many things happened, mom got a new boyfriend, and he was getting his kids attention and many funny things happened. Definitely it is a good classic and a good movie.
Week #6:
In this week I went to the movies with my friend Adrian and my little sister and a little cousin, we went on a boring and rainy Saturday to see Shrek 3-D. It was a good movie, if you are an 8 year old. It’s not that 3-D, and it’s really boring, it was so boring, that I slept on the movie. This movie is only about Shrek’s marriage problems, that he hires a magician so that he can be a normal ogre one more day. The problem is that the magician tricks Shrek and makes everything different of what it is, ogres are slaves, and the magician is the king, and Shrek tries to stop him. The movie shows all of the problems that happen. Shrek’s wife Fiona is the leader of the ogre resistance, and the only way to make everything normal, is for Shrek to make Fiona love him again. By midnight if not, everything stays permanent.
Week #7:
In this week I saw Cop out, excellent movie, and comedy. This movie is about two cops that get suspended for their work, they destroy everything, and one of the cops has a daughter which is marrying and can’t be suspended. So what he does is that he has a baseball card that is worth about $83,000. So he finds a buyer and goes to sell it, and tells his partner to have an eye for him, but his partner is talking to the phone with his wife and it’s real funny. So a robbery happens on the store and they get the baseball card. So the story is how the cops try to get the baseball card back. It’s really funny I liked it a lot.
Week #8:
July 20, my trip to Tampa and Miami started today. In this trip my family and me are going to make various activities, we are going to Busch Gardens and my sister and I are going to Rihanna and Kesha concert. First we went to Busch Gardens, it was really fun, we got to all the rollercoaster with my sister, the scariest one, was Sheikra. On Busch Gardens we had a lot of fun because it’s a park for teenagers like my sister and me and we liked it a lot. Then on Miami we went to the triple AAA to a concert of Rihanna and Kesha. It was really fun and wild, we took many pictures and we got out of there like at 1 am.
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3/5
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15/25
Summer Homework
Week #1:
In this week I saw a famous movie about the end of the world caused by an epidemic disease, this is one of my over-all favorite movies of all times, I have this movie, almost every time I am bored on my house and I remember about this movie I see it, in this case I saw it again, it’s called Resident Evil 3. This movie is about the end of the world, and the story of a project that The Umbrella Industry made and this project called ‘Project Alice’ got out of control, and the movie shows her adventures to her revenge, and how she can redeem The Umbrella’s Industries problem made, the end of the world. There has been three movies about resident evil, in this one she finds a group of survivors in trouble with some zombie birds, when she sees them she goes and help them, on the way Alice found a book on a gas station that said that the disease didn’t reach Alaska, so she propones the idea to the survivors to go to Alaska. When they are on their way to re-supply for the trip, they find trouble, The Umbrella Industry wants to get Alice back, so they send some mutant zombies to attack them, they survive the attack, and Alice saw a helicopter, she didn’t shoot it because she wanted it for the trip to Alaska. So they went to make a plan to steal the helicopter, they make it inside the fence of the helicopter, and everyone gets in, except Alice, she tells the survivors that she has to stay and figure out a way to solve this and make her revenge, after this, Alice goes down to the lab, and figures out that there’s a mutant there, and killed everyone on the lab, they fight, and finally Alice wins, but on the lab she sees millions of her clones, Umbrella Industries was trying to make a clone of her. But now, all of those clones, are on her side, and she tells the other people of the world that are hidden underground of Umbrella Industries to prepare. I like this movie and I will keep seeing it every time, but, maybe until the next one comes out.
Week #2:
Today I went to rent out movies with my sister, it is Sunday and we were bored so we went to get a movie, we wanted to have something funny so we saw the movie ‘She’s Out of My League’ the guy from the movies told us it was a funny one, so we checked it out. When we got home we made some popcorns and started seeing the movie, we loved the movie from beginning to end it was really funny. This movie is about a group of guys that work on the airport, and while they are working they see a ‘smoking hot’ girl, one of those guys is really humble, the other one is married, and the other one thinks all the girls desire him and that he is hot, so the guy that thinks he is hot tries to get the girl, but the girl didn’t pay attention to him, so the humble guy just helped the girl with her luggage, because the guy knew that the girl was really out of his league, so at the end this girl likes the humble guy, and many problems happen, the girl goes to lunch with the guys family, which is really strange by the way. But she doesn’t care she just cares about the guy, and the guy just keeps trying to be better for her, and tries to be someone that’s not him, and the girl want him, so that’s a problem. But at the end they solve all the problems and get together. This is a comedy and a love story at the same time, it’s really good.
Week #3:
On this week I went to the movies with my friends to see Prince of Persia. This is a really long movie, I did not like the movie, but it was entertaining in some parts. This movie is about conspiracy in the kingdom, the prince of Persia tries to find out what happened to his father, and the movie is about all the adventures he makes to find what happened. He is taken by a group of rebels, because the kingdom thought that he killed his father in this case the king. So everyone was looking for him, he found a girl on his way that at the end fell in love, but on the way the hated each other. Both of them make it out of the rebels, and many more problems that faced them, but they found their way to get out, and at the end he finds the truth, that his uncle was corrupt and killed the kind (his brother) but he found this out with the help of magic, with a knife that could go back in time.
Week #4:
On this week I went to the movies with my cousins and they went with their boyfriend and girlfriend, which was very awkward. But we had a good time, we saw toy story 3-D, it was really funny, even though it’s one of the most famous toddler movie. But we liked it; it didn’t have a lot of 3-D. This toy story was that Andy was going to college and he had to put the toys in a bag that went into the attic or to the garbage. So he got all his toys, except Woody to the attic bag, Andy decided to take Woody with him to college. So he got all his toys into a bag, but Andy went to talk to his sister and left the bag in the hall, so his mom got the bag and thought that the bag was garbage. So he took it to the garbage, Woody say that and went to rescue his friends, and told them that they were going to the attic not to the garbage, but they wouldn’t believe Woody. So they say a box that said “donations” and the toys decided to go there so that the kids in the daycare could play with them. So woody went into the box to stop them, and mom closed the car and Woody got trapped with his friends, when they got to the daycare they saw the entire place which was shown by the other toys in the daycare. Woody could get out of the daycare before the kids got in from recess. But when the kids came in and started playing with Woody’s friends, it was awful, they destroyed toys! When they wanted to get out of there, the other toys of the daycare were evil and did not let toys to get out of the daycare. So Woody went to another girl’s house for an accident, and the toys on the girl’s house told him that the daycare was evil. So Woody went back to the daycare and rescued his friends. So many events and problems happened but Woody and his friends got out. It was really funny and entertaining.
Week #5:
In this week I saw a classic, Mrs. Doubtfire. I found it in my dad’s old movies, he told me to see it, that it was really funny and that it was a classic. So I went and saw it. I liked a lot! It was about a father that did not have a job and was too disorganized, but he had a special and unique skill. He made voices, old woman voices, alien voices and etc. so with his brother that made costumes made him a costume of an old lady, and he made the voice of the new and invented ‘Mrs. Doubtfire’ his ex-wife was looking for a nanny and he/she was the perfect “lady” for the job. So mom gave him/her the job. He made this because he loved his children more than everything, and the divorce only let him see them one time a week, so that way he could see them every day. So he had to live to lives, Mrs. Doubtfire’s life, and the unemployed, divorced man who had to find a job. So he worked all day every day, he found a way and was Mrs. Doubtfire. He worked packing boxes for a TV company. At night when he was alone in the studio, he started dreaming that he was in the show and started making voices and the director of the show saw him and gave him an opportunity to be in the show. In the process of this many things happened, mom got a new boyfriend, and he was getting his kids attention and many funny things happened. Definitely it is a good classic and a good movie.
Week #6:
In this week I went to the movies with my friend Adrian and my little sister and a little cousin, we went on a boring and rainy Saturday to see Shrek 3-D. It was a good movie, if you are an 8 year old. It’s not that 3-D, and it’s really boring, it was so boring, that I slept on the movie. This movie is only about Shrek’s marriage problems, that he hires a magician so that he can be a normal ogre one more day. The problem is that the magician tricks Shrek and makes everything different of what it is, ogres are slaves, and the magician is the king, and Shrek tries to stop him. The movie shows all of the problems that happen. Shrek’s wife Fiona is the leader of the ogre resistance, and the only way to make everything normal, is for Shrek to make Fiona love him again. By midnight if not, everything stays permanent.
Week #7:
In this week I saw Cop out, excellent movie, and comedy. This movie is about two cops that get suspended for their work, they destroy everything, and one of the cops has a daughter which is marrying and can’t be suspended. So what he does is that he has a baseball card that is worth about $83,000. So he finds a buyer and goes to sell it, and tells his partner to have an eye for him, but his partner is talking to the phone with his wife and it’s real funny. So a robbery happens on the store and they get the baseball card. So the story is how the cops try to get the baseball card back. It’s really funny I liked it a lot.
Week #8:
July 20, my trip to Tampa and Miami started today. In this trip my family and me are going to make various activities, we are going to Busch Gardens and my sister and I are going to Rihanna and Kesha concert. First we went to Busch Gardens, it was really fun, we got to all the rollercoaster with my sister, the scariest one, was Sheikra. On Busch Gardens we had a lot of fun because it’s a park for teenagers like my sister and me and we liked it a lot. Then on Miami we went to the triple AAA to a concert of Rihanna and Kesha. It was really fun and wild, we took many pictures and we got out of there like at 1 am.